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I don’t need them to believe in me,
I know I might seem weak but look can deceive.
I guess their rather let me think I am down,
Make me imagine that what I see isn’t real.
And there is nothing in the world I can do or say,
To be the way I am.

Although sometimes their poison bites,
I know that analyzing souls are not their job,
Like they could ever understand more than their ego needs,
They rather lock us all in where we can never see,
Changes that we could make, rules that need to break.
If you will try strong enough, just believe in you and all will work out. never let anyone tell you that you can't do or chang something!
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brass-bird Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010
Ooooh, I love that last stanza. Especially the first line. Biting poison- very nice.
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks a lot! :aww:
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010   General Artist
I agree with ~mindlessmaze, but I like the message you've written, it's quite interesting the way you wrote it. Nice job.
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thank you! :D
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2010   General Artist
my pleasure :heart:
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mindlessmaze Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2009
This has a good point/message. :)

also I've few grammar remarks/questions -
Is it maybe:
"I guess they'd rather let me think I am down"
and

"I know that analyzing souls is not their job"
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:iconmyartself:
MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Ah well, english is not my main language but I try ;)
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mindlessmaze Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2009
You're doing fine, just keep it up :)
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:iconmyartself:
MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks! :hug:
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A-Thrash-In-The-Pan Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
deep dude
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks! :)
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A-Thrash-In-The-Pan Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
your welcome
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N0-R3AL-PR0BL3MS Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
amazing message in a unique way =]
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thank you very much!:hug:
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N0-R3AL-PR0BL3MS Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
np =]
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NeverLeavingYourSide Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
You've been featured.: ) [link]
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:iconmyartself:
MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thank you so much! :hug: I appreciate it a lot :D
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smexy-sarah Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
'And there is nothing in the world I can do or say,
To be the way I am.' i love that line. very pretty :iconpandaballoonplz:
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thank you! :)
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MariaShade Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
That is really quite deep, an amazing message, as others have already said.
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks a lot :D
I'm really glad that you liked it!
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Knockonthedoor Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
This is nice. :) I like it.
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:iconmyartself:
MyArtself Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thank you very much for your comment and the :+fav:! :hug:
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Knockonthedoor Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
No probs! :hug:
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BlueSilverUU Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009
Astounding message, this is powerful!
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thank you very much! :D
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iris1999 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very well done:D
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MyArtself Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Lots of thanks :)
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iris1999 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
welcome:D
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Formlessforce Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009
I like it! :) I particularly enjoyed the line "I know that analyzing souls is not their job".
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:iconmyartself:
MyArtself Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks! :D
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Braama Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009
thats deep
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:iconmyartself:
MyArtself Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Thanks! :)
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:iconbraama:
Braama Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009
welcome!
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